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Stephen King's Advice on Writing: Kill Your Darlings, Read Everything, Close the Door

- Moritz Wallawitsch

Stephen King has sold over 350 million books. He wrote The Shining, It, The Stand, Misery, and dozens more. His memoir on craft, On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft, is the most-read book about writing ever published. It is half autobiography and half instruction manual. The autobiography gives the instructions weight. When King tells you to write 2,000 words a day, you believe him because he has done it for fifty years.

The advice below draws from On Writing, Writing Workshops' "20 Tips" compilation, Barnes & Noble's "Top 20 Rules," and Hunting the Muse's analysis of King's daily routine.

Write with the Door Closed, Rewrite with the Door Open

This is King's most famous piece of advice. The first draft is private. You write it for yourself. No audience. No critics. No editor looking over your shoulder. Close the door and get the story down.

The second draft is public. Open the door. Let trusted readers in. Listen to their feedback. Cut what confuses them. Expand what interests them. The first draft is about getting the clay on the table. The second draft is about shaping it.

Most writers fail because they try to do both at once. They write a sentence, then immediately judge it. They edit while they draft. The inner critic kills the inner creator. King's solution is simple: separate the two. Draft with abandon. Edit with discipline. Never at the same time.

Kill Your Darlings

Kill your darlings, kill your darlings, even when it breaks your egocentric little scribbler's heart, kill your darlings.

Every writer has sentences they love too much. A clever phrase. A beautiful metaphor. A paragraph they spent hours perfecting. The problem is that loving a sentence is not the same as that sentence serving the story. If it does not move things forward, it has to go. No matter how much you love it.

This is the hardest discipline in writing. It requires you to care more about the work than about your attachment to any single part of it. King learned this the hard way. He wrote entire chapters that he loved and then cut them because they slowed the story down. The book got better every time.

This connects to the Bird by Bird approach where Anne Lamott talks about terrible first drafts. The point is the same: do not protect your early writing. It is raw material. Shape it ruthlessly.

The Adverb Is Not Your Friend

"The adverb is not your friend." King is direct about this. Adverbs are a sign that the writer does not trust the verb. "He ran quickly" means you picked the wrong verb. "He sprinted" is better. "She said softly" means the dialogue is not doing its job. If the words themselves are soft, you do not need to tell the reader.

Adverbs tell instead of show. They are the lazy way to add detail. They modify from the outside instead of building meaning from the inside. King calls them dandelions on a lawn. One is fine. A hundred means you have a problem.

The fix is stronger verbs. "Walked slowly" becomes "shuffled." "Spoke loudly" becomes "shouted." "Ate quickly" becomes "devoured." Each replacement removes a word and adds precision. The writing gets shorter and sharper at the same time.

Read a Lot, Write a Lot

"If you want to be a writer, you must do two things above all others: read a lot and write a lot." King reads 70 to 80 books a year. He reads everywhere. In line. At lunch. Before bed. On the treadmill (audiobooks count).

Reading teaches you what good writing feels like. Not through analysis but through absorption. You read enough good sentences and your brain starts producing them. You read enough bad writing and you learn to recognize it in your own work.

King says there is no shortcut. You cannot learn to write by reading about writing. You learn by reading writing and writing writing. The hours accumulate. The patterns sink in. One day you write a sentence that surprises you and you realize the reading is paying off.

Use the First Word That Comes to Mind

Do not reach for the thesaurus. Use the word that came to you first. It came first because it is closest to what you mean. Reaching for a fancier word dilutes your voice. It replaces natural speech with performance.

"Any word you have to hunt for in a thesaurus is the wrong word." Your vocabulary is your vocabulary. It came from the books you read and the conversations you had. It reflects how you think. When you swap your natural words for impressive ones, you are pretending to be someone else. The reader can tell.

2,000 Words a Day

King writes 2,000 words every day. No exceptions. Not 1,999. He sits down in the morning and does not get up until the count is hit. Some days the words flow. Some days they crawl. The count does not care.

This is not about productivity hacks. It is about building a relationship with the work. When you show up every day, writing becomes a habit instead of an event. You stop waiting for inspiration. You stop needing the perfect conditions. You just write.

King finishes a first draft in about three months. "The length of a season." Any longer and the story starts to feel foreign. The characters fade. The momentum dies. Three months keeps everything fresh and urgent.

Situation Over Plot

I distrust plot for two reasons: first, because our lives are largely plotless, even when you add in all our reasonable plans and our unforeseeable experiences.

King does not outline his novels. He starts with a situation and lets the characters figure it out. What if a writer was trapped in a farmhouse with his biggest fan? That is Misery. What if a haunted hotel drove a man insane? That is The Shining. The situation creates the story. The characters make the choices.

This approach requires trust. You have to trust that the characters will find their way. You have to tolerate not knowing where the story is going. King says this uncertainty is what keeps writing exciting. If you know the ending before you start, the writing becomes a chore.

When You Rewrite, Remove

"When you rewrite, your main job is taking out all the things that are not the story." Not adding. Removing. The first draft contains everything you thought of. The second draft keeps only what the story needs.

King uses a formula for his second draft: second draft equals first draft minus ten percent. If the first draft is 100,000 words, the second should be 90,000. This forces you to cut. Every chapter. Every page. Every paragraph. What can go? What must stay? The question is always the same. Does this serve the story?

This is where rough drafts become real writing. The first draft gives you material. The second draft gives you a book. King's rewriting process is about removal, not revision. Take out what does not belong. What remains is the story.

Key Takeaways

  • Write with the door closed. Rewrite with the door open. Separate creation from editing.
  • Kill your darlings. Cut what you love if it does not serve the work.
  • The adverb is not your friend. Use stronger verbs instead.
  • Read 70 to 80 books a year. There is no shortcut to learning how to write.
  • Use the first word that comes to mind. The thesaurus is a trap.
  • Write 2,000 words a day. Every day. Finish the first draft in three months.
  • Start with situation, not plot. Let the characters drive the story.
  • Second draft equals first draft minus ten percent. Rewriting means removing.

King's "rewrite with the door open" is the editing phase where AI becomes useful. His "kill your darlings" principle gets easier when you see each change as a diff and decide what stays. The best writing tips all converge on the same idea: write freely first, then cut without mercy.

This post draws from King's On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft, Writing Workshops, Barnes & Noble, and Hunting the Muse. Athens is an AI writing editor that helps you rewrite with the door open - showing every AI change as a diff so you can kill your darlings with confidence.